my story :D

I enjoy being naked

I don't get it. x.x"

everyone will be in it who wants to be ^^ and daft i can make you the awesome eni that heals ankion =)

Wewt!

okay daft your gonna be a eni who SPOILER COMING helps me TRY (could not happen maybe :3) to break Varia and lagg out.
and night your gonna be one of the brakmarian captains or caps right hand man (havent decided yet ^^)

and what do you think of the rp i posted a bit back =) u think it'l work?

BAM!!
OMG Im so evil :DDD
:3 I love being the bad guy

Sweet! Make me an Osa in the story. And I don't work for anybody!

very well... well are you gonna be evil?

You could make him my henchie for a bit...but then he could be, in reality, plotting to overthrow me and rule the world

So he would only be working for me for a bit.

Ooooor he could be working with me, and we could both be trying to take over the world together,

oooor he could be the real baddie, and I could be his henchie...the one who carries out his evil deeds

Yes, I still am evil.

Just out of curiosity...does the sadistic Caps have a soft side, or is she the real, 100%$, demonic sadist she seems to be? :3

you'll have to wait and see ;D

Okey doke :[ *Can deal with this*

okay folks the next chpters nearly done, sorry i ahvent been posting it writers block x.x
but nearly done and the people added in this and the next chapter will include nightfalme, and daft ;D hope u enjoy it =)

Just call me Night.

Okay sry guys had really bad writers block but have got it back and have a few chapters ready. There is a big plot twist and night sry x.x I decided to put you in later as a "bounty hunter"

I'm in purgatory

Bounty Hunters are alright. So I guess I'll be hunting down those four people.

@magic yes in the rp the rune's will be noticed, and how me lagg and you all have the same one's i will try to explain them, maybe i wise old.. hmm... *starts writing*
in this next chapter daft will be introduced =D

anyway guy's here it is!!!!! chapter 4: the plan!

"no!" Allisandra screamed as lagg, Varia and caps vanished from sight.
"Allis... there gone..." Ankion told her bluntly.
"no!..no.. no! we must find them!" Allisandra cried tear's blurring her vision.
"okay, calm down, im guessing.. we could... give it a shot.. if you want to.."
"really? and you would come to?"
"of course.. i wouldn't leave you for the world.
Allisandra kisses him on the lips," you always say the right thing's." she said with a beaming smile, wiping away her tears.
"well then... there's no point hanging around around, ill go thank the healer, and you get some supplies".
they met back up at the library," okay ive got us more than enough supplies." Allisandra stated.
the road to brakmar was long and treacherous. they fought many creature's, big and small, until they arrived at the north gate of brakmar, it was an unholy sight.
"god of Sacrier....." Allisandra muttered, mouth open wide.
"psst... over here" Ankion and Allisandra turned, blades drawn.
An enripsa faded into view.
"camouflage potion... work's a treat..." exclaimed the enripsa.
"excuse me.. who are you? and what are you doing here?" Ankion asked bewildered by the man's casual attitude.
"names daft" he said giving a bow " im an eni, if you hadn't guessed already, what im doing? hmm... that's a tricky one, i heard about your friend's being captured, heard you were coming to get 'em and well, here we are!" he exclaimed with a beam on his face.
"okay..." Allisandra said, mouth open wide.
"well then, we going in?" he was practically bouncing.
"well.. i guess so"Ankion muttered.
And they entered three of them against brakmar!

okay guy's =D hope u liked it have more chapter's to follow shortly with a BIG plot twist ;D
hope u enjoyed it please comment and suggestion's are always welcome.
=D

*Waits in suspense*

okay folks, the time uve all been waiting for (probably not but oh well)

yes well this chapter is rather short =( but i will try to post another 1 tomorrow (i have 4 or 5 stocked up) (and am also on chapter 8 gonna include, daft, night, and silver cuz your so cool =3)

chapter 5 BRAKMAR!
"psst, Allis, how are we gonna exactly get into the militia?" Ankion muttered under his breath.
"umm... that will become apparent in due course."
"come on hurry up!" daft cried, hoping from foot to foot.
As they crept along the streets they heard patrols passing ,and other fearful noises.
they were about to get to the militia tower they heard a guards voice penetrating the silence,"hey you! stop!"
"shit they've spotted us, run!" Allisandra commanded, but before they had ran a few feet Allisandra heard a scream and Ankion shot past her and hit a wall, slumping to the floor dazed.
Allisandra spun round but before she could react was sent flying back by a frightening word. All she could do was watch as the guards came.
"good work adventurer here's a reward!"
Allisandra and Ankion were picked up and escorted towards the militia tower...

okay like normal... post.. comment la bla bla !!! stay tuned!

Nice, Aliss If you want to make your stories a bit longer, you should add in a bit more detail. Where were they hiding? What does the militia look like? While you were flying through the air, what did you see? Did your life flash before your eyes? :3

Well thats my opinion...critique?

Still, action is good ;D
Yay for carnage!

Aww, do I betray them? :'(

Quote :

"you look funny naked!" she laughed dryly.
Lagg looked down and realised his whole body was exposed.
"hey! what do you want with me?" Lagg roared covering himself up with one hand.
"you? you are here because you are one of the four adventures."
Suddenly Lagg remembered what had happened earlier.
"Varia? where is she!" he screamed out.
"oh her? she is... fine.. in fact she's over there, Caps said pointing behind her.
Light illuminated the spot she had pointed at, Lagg swore.
Varia was suspended by shackles, Also naked.

^whats that? is that a suggestion?

nuu, explain.