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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: my story :D Wed May 19, 2010 8:23 pm | |
| okay this is a story i made in about 5 mins.. its only the intro and im working on chapter 1 P.S this is a SHORT story so it wont be too long anyway here we go =3 P.P.S this i like when the monsters are first evil :3 name: a day like any other.... intro: it was a day like any other... until something disastrous happened.. the gobbals of incarnum became aggresive and unfriendly. the boars of the astrub forest started rampaging and scaring people away. the world of twelve was broken, good and evil fought for the land and people were scared to leave the citys. but then when all was nearly lost four adventure liked by from birth by a glowing rune on their arm. their names were.. Allisandra, a sram Lagg, a pandawa Varia, a sacrier and ankion, another sacrier this is there story... okay tell me what u tink pls :3 | |
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capslok Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : CANADA!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Thu May 20, 2010 4:47 am | |
| I think it would be lovely if the there was someone causing all of this...like...say...Caps! the evil, demonic Sram-rogue-turned-bad. (And believe me, thats bad) :3 But otherwise, it sounds like its gonna rawk | |
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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: good one Thu May 20, 2010 2:29 pm | |
| yea caps... the evil one... has a good ring to it mno... the dark one :3 anyway thanks for the comment ive nearly finsihed chapter 1 | |
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Lagg Guard
Posts : 539 Join date : 2010-02-18 Age : 29 Location : anywhere but here
| Subject: Re: my story :D Thu May 20, 2010 5:34 pm | |
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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Thu May 20, 2010 6:33 pm | |
| yea i bet u love it cuz your init ;D | |
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capslok Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : CANADA!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Fri May 21, 2010 12:36 am | |
| Did you put it up yet? | |
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Lagg Guard
Posts : 539 Join date : 2010-02-18 Age : 29 Location : anywhere but here
| Subject: Re: my story :D Fri May 21, 2010 1:16 am | |
| - allisandra wrote:
- yea i bet u love it cuz your init ;D
hell yeah x) | |
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NightFlame Scout
Posts : 375 Join date : 2010-05-12 Age : 27 Location : Fairy Tail Headquarters
| Subject: Re: my story :D Fri May 21, 2010 9:22 am | |
| 4 adventurers with runes on their arm... that reminds me of an anime. | |
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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Fri May 21, 2010 6:11 pm | |
| @ night rly? oh well i dont watch rly any animes and @caps i ahve your chapter with u in nearly finsihed :3
anyway... here's chapter 1!
CHAPTER 1 The Fight!
"ruuunnn!" Allisandra screamed as fire and lightning arced across the sky. "what kind of bwork magus is this!?" lagg roared. Varia was struggling against three bworks who were attacking her, it didn't look good. Ankion was battling with two bwork archers, thirsty for blood "die you son of a tofu, die!" Ankion shouted lopping off one of the bwork archers heads in the process. "Ankion watch out!" Allisandra Screamed, but she was hit back by a fireball. Ankion screamed, a sword protruding through his chest blood pumping out of the wound. The bwork Magus cackled, saw that he had done enough pain and fled through the forest with its minions on its tail. "Ankion, Ankion! no!!" Allisandra cried, tears streaming down her face and merging with the blood splatters. "here.." Varia said passing Allisandra a handkerchief. "Th-Thanks.." Allisandra said wiping the tears and blood from her face. Suddenly Ankion made a groan,"Ankion? he's alive! come on we've got to get him to an enripsa now!" Allisandra commanded. "iv'e got him.." Varia said picking Ankion up. "I heard there's a good enripsa healer in amakna village, were quite close, its not a very long journey... we should get there by sundown..."
Chapter two coming soon! | |
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NightFlame Scout
Posts : 375 Join date : 2010-05-12 Age : 27 Location : Fairy Tail Headquarters
| Subject: Re: my story :D Sat May 22, 2010 12:41 am | |
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capslok Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : CANADA!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Sat May 22, 2010 1:27 am | |
| Mooore! *Must here more* I like it | |
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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Sun May 23, 2010 1:05 am | |
| okay i should be able to post the next chapter on monday nad @caps yes you are in it | |
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capslok Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : CANADA!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Sun May 23, 2010 7:29 pm | |
| Reeeely????
*Walks out of room and begins dancing madly once out of sight*
YAHOO! | |
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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Mon May 24, 2010 7:20 pm | |
| hey guys this is the new chapter for my story hope you like it :D:D Chapter 2 The Sram "hey Ankion" Allisandra said as she walked into the room Ankion was staying in. "oh hi Allis" Ankion said, wincing as he sat up. "you okay now?" "the eni says ill be out in a day or two". "im glad your better" They looked into each others eyes and then, passionately kissed. "love you" Allisandra whispered "love you t--" BOOM! "what the fuck was that!?" Allisandra screamed, as they ran out to the courtyard they saw four fighting a female Sram. suddenly she cast mistake, sending the four guards flying back, they didn't move again.. "who the hell is that?" Ankion asked Allisandra "I don't know but I don't like it" "The names Capslock but you can call me Caps, and you two are coming with me.." She said in a dark voice. "no!" Varia leapt from the undergrowth and charged at the Sram, caps turned around and stabbed Varia in the chest. Varia moaned a little and then collapsed on the ground, "Varia!!" Lagg screamed as he bolted out of the doors, clearing the space between him and Caps in a matter of seconds. He punched Caps so hard it could have felled a trool, she didn't even flinch. "pathetic scum...." she spat before kicking the Pandawa unconscious. "these two will have to do..." she muttered, flashing a wicked smile, then all of them vanished without a trace... okay tell me what you think the next chapter shall be based on Lagg and Varia. hope you enjoyed it Allisandra out | |
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capslok Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : CANADA!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Mon May 24, 2010 8:29 pm | |
| OMG YEA!!!!! I like being the bad one ^^ *Walks around for the rest of the day with a huuuge grin on face* | |
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NightFlame Scout
Posts : 375 Join date : 2010-05-12 Age : 27 Location : Fairy Tail Headquarters
| Subject: Re: my story :D Tue May 25, 2010 12:58 am | |
| I don't think I'll be in it, right? | |
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capslok Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : CANADA!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Tue May 25, 2010 4:00 am | |
| Yea! Night should be in it too He should be a hero that rescues them ;D | |
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Yackul Admin
Posts : 410 Join date : 2010-02-08 Age : 31 Location : Washington
| Subject: Re: my story :D Tue May 25, 2010 4:22 am | |
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NightFlame Scout
Posts : 375 Join date : 2010-05-12 Age : 27 Location : Fairy Tail Headquarters
| Subject: Re: my story :D Tue May 25, 2010 8:45 am | |
| I prefer being evil than good. | |
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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Tue May 25, 2010 7:24 pm | |
| anyone whio wants to join i will gladly find chapters for them oh and i was thinking maybe we should have a prologue RP like when they were in school and ofcourse me lag varia etc will play us and we could have people like our friends playing other kids =) tell me if u think this a good idea. | |
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allisandra Secretary
Posts : 222 Join date : 2010-05-09 Age : 29 Location : IN THE FIERY DEPTHS OF MOUNT DOOM!!!
| Subject: Re: my story :D Tue May 25, 2010 8:46 pm | |
| okay here we go this next chapter is actually mostly talking and based on lagg there is "nudity" but no description of it. Chapter 3 Captured! The room was dark... that's all that Lagg could tell about his surroundings. "urgh.. where... where am i?" he moaned into the darkness. " In brakmar of course... in fact, why don't we turn on the lights?" There was a sudden bright light, Lagg squinted as his eyes adjusted to the light. He saw Caps looking at him through the bars of the prison, she smiled. "you look funny naked!" she laughed dryly. Lagg looked down and realised his whole body was exposed. "hey! what do you want with me?" Lagg roared covering himself up with one hand. "you? you are here because you are one of the four adventures." Suddenly Lagg remembered what had happened earlier. "Varia? where is she!" he screamed out. "oh her? she is... fine.. in fact she's over there, Caps said pointing behind her. Light illuminated the spot she had pointed at, Lagg swore. Varia was suspended by shackles, Also naked. she was bleeding heavily from wounds across here whole body. "what have you done to her?!" Lagg screamed, punching the bars, anger clouding his mind. "quite down now, the reason she is like this is because she didn't give us the information we require.." "what information? please I'll tell you just don't hurt Varia!" Lagg was almost crying by this point. "good... im glad we have come to a compromise." Caps flashed a wicked smile before opening the prison door.... to be continued =) hope you liked it sorry if i offended you in any way lagg or Varia i just thought it would be appropriate.. not sure why though anyway OPINIONS! im hoping you'll like it so i can put more chapters up Allisandra out :3 | |
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Yackul Admin
Posts : 410 Join date : 2010-02-08 Age : 31 Location : Washington
| Subject: Re: my story :D Wed May 26, 2010 3:07 am | |
| Wow I like it! | |
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NightFlame Scout
Posts : 375 Join date : 2010-05-12 Age : 27 Location : Fairy Tail Headquarters
| Subject: Re: my story :D Wed May 26, 2010 8:16 am | |
| Awesome! Thats all I can say... | |
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Ankion Defender
Posts : 1119 Join date : 2010-02-18 Location : butts
| Subject: Re: my story :D Wed May 26, 2010 8:41 am | |
| I am a huge faggot, please rape my face
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Yackul Admin
Posts : 410 Join date : 2010-02-08 Age : 31 Location : Washington
| Subject: Re: my story :D Wed May 26, 2010 8:42 am | |
| Daft's an Eni if he's in it! x3 | |
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