My Immortal (Part Fan-Fiction)

Preface:
In this world, humans can possess powers, turn into animals and there are many other species in the world that are equal to them as well - such as the Lupin species and Elf species. In this world, there is one Supreme Being - Selena, a Lupin, the most powerful being in the universe. Her two protectors, Brown and Seth, were send on the word of God himself to protect her as former angels. There is one group who would like to do harm to this Supreme Being, called The Organization. Their members may dwell anywhere, set traps, and lurk under your bed...

Characters:
Selena/Lupin/Female/14 yrs old (brother: Connor/subject to Riot of Blood)
Brown/Angel/Male/26 yrs old (Selena's guardian angel)
Seth/Angel/Male/16 yrs old (Selena's guardian angel)
Mister/C-Angel/Male/12 yrs old (secretly oversees Seth and Brown's work)
Castiel/Human/Male/35 yrs old (insane evil scientist/The Organization)
Connor/Unknown/Male/17 yrs old (sister: Selena/The Organization)
Iori/Human/Male/20 yrs old (also subject to Riot of Blood
Orochi/Demon/Male/age unknown (Curser of Riot of Blood/The Organization/Selena's Equal-In-Power


Chapters:
-A Terrifying Discovery (one)
-A Sibling Rivalry (two/in process)

Chapter One: A Terrifying Discovery!

Connor walked in, staring at the floor, a frustrated sense seeping through his skin. Connor was my half-blood brother. He was thought to be Elf-Lupin cross, unlike myself, who's full-blooded Lupin. He has very long, brown hair and a small goatee that gives him a fierce look. His eyes, too, are brown. I look much like my brother, aside from the silly looking long Elf ears. Instead, I have furry white wolf ears and a puffy white tail, too.
As brother entered, I saw a gleam of rebellion in his eyes.
"His aura is different than usual," whispered Seth, one of my guardians who sat next to me on the sofa. "In fact, I'd say it was rather furious. His mind is racing, too." I nodded.
Seth and Brown were my two guardians - fallen angels sent down to protect me, an order from God Himself. Brown has short, rather spiky brown hair and brown eyes, and a brown brown martial-arts based uniform. He also carries around a ninja's sword.
Seth, on the other hand, is more Gothic and - dare I say it - more serious. His outfit is rather unfathomable, though. He carries a ten-foot buster sword on his back and tons of chains.
"What's wrong, brother?" I asked innocently. He halted and looked over his shoulder at me.
"Nothing, sister, I am just in one of my weird moods again." He turned and heavily climbed the stairs to the second floor. I turned to Seth.
"You so easily read his emotions. Can you tell what's on his mind?" I asked, ears twitching as I sat awkwardly on the sofa.
"If we could read minds, our job would be much easier," Brown teased as he sat beside Seth, who silenced him with a finger.
"I can tell his intentions are not pure," he said in a hushed tone. What did he mean? "Don't let your guard down for even a second." He patted me on the head with a huge, annoying grin.
"Don't treat me like I'm five," I growled as I pulled away, "If you two would do your jobs and guard me, I might not have Riot of the Blood, now, would I?" I teased, half-jokingly. Brown looked away guiltily but Seth didn't blink. Instead, he shrugged coolly.
"You left without permission the night when that happened, miss. It wasn't our fault."
"Whatever," I concluded. Riot of the Blood was a stage I was cursed with that I enter when provoked or in the presence of Orochi, the one who cursed me with it. When in that stage, I lose consciousness and can't control my own actions, and I usually wake up with serious injuries. I apparently rage and lash out violently at everyone.
"Anyway," Seth broke in, "we should be getting some rest." He stretched, glancing over at the bed place. "This stupid Inn, giving us a room with only two beds." He looked at Brown and then at me. "Hmmm, maybe..." he started thoughtfully.
"Brown can turn into a hawk and you can turn into a wolf and you can both sleep that way," I blurted. No way was I going to sleep in the same bed with anyone. Seth began to argue but quickly broke off when Connor came back down the stairs.
"The toilet is broke." He said dryly. I burst out laughing.
"Now it probably stinks, thanks to your poo!" I teased. Connor grabbed me and gave me a painful nookie. "Ow! Stop that!" I cried out, and then without thinking, sank my fangs into his arm.
"Crap! Ow!" He shouted, examining his arm, which had two small puncture wounds in it that were seeping with blood. For a brief moment I sensed murderous intent in his mind. Seth and Brown must have felt it, too, because they quickly rushed to my aid.
Seth had an assassin's knife held at Connor's throat while Brown stood in front of me, his blade drawn and a tense look on his face.
Don't touch her," Seth spoke into Connor's ear, "I will end you..." He concluded as he slowly withdrew. He didn't put his knife back, though. Brown sheathed his sword, but tension crackled from his skin like fireworks. Connor snorted.
"You underestimate me. Who says you could win in a fight?" He threatened. For the first time ever, he appeared to be someone else. In an attempt to resolve the situation, I said, "I'm really sorry, brother. I didn't mean it. But you were hurting me..." He quickly broke me off.
"We're going to bed," he sneered, a disgusted look on his face.

Chapter Two: A Sibling Rivalry!

I woke to a shadowy figure standing above me. Before I could react, an eerie, red glowing eye penetrated the darkness.
"O-Orochi...!?" I managed to choke out. No.. it was my brother. I flailed in an attempt to escape, but his hand was cuffed over my throat. "O...Oro..chi!!" I choked. Then, I realized it was light. Alerted faces surrounded me.
"What is wrong??" Asked Brown.
"It's okay! It was only a nightmare.." Seth soothed, his hand laying on my shoulder.
"...No..N..No..." I stammered. It seemed so real! "It was Orochi.." I coughed.

(to be continued...)