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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Mon Mar 07, 2011 5:37 pm | |
| Thats nice Fleaman. Keep up the work. | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:45 pm | |
| . Ex-girlfriendIf I had known what I know now I would not have asked Nor grown somehow Into that person in your passed Who remembers you still. If I had better hidden what I hide today I would not have shown you Nor given away The me that remains out of view That l have to kill. If I could hate you like I hated then I would not have come today Nor dashed again These passions lovers pay when all comes to nill. -fleamailman- | |
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Tue Mar 08, 2011 1:41 am | |
| Thats good. Pretty harsh lol. But good. | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Thu Mar 10, 2011 4:55 pm | |
| . MicrosoftiousI met a broker of the Wallstreet brand Who said: Two vast and worthless piles of stock Lie crashed upon the ground. About them, near to hand, Now shrunk, these tattered credits lies, that shock, Of bloated slips whose sure and bold command, Tell that their author well those passions read, Which yet survive, scribbled on these worthless things, The hand that believed them, and the heart that bled, And upon their cardboard box these words appear: "My name is Microsoftious, Share of Shares: Look upon my works, ye wealthy, and despair!" Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of this colossal crash, boundless and bare The blown and leveled brands stretch far away. -fleamailman- | |
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:08 am | |
| Pretty good. Keep up the good work! | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:18 am | |
| . My childhoodA poem to a ghost a memory nothing more a boy upon the coast a wind upon the shore a promise upon that gust as if the two of us could swap (what we saw) - fleamailman - | |
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Thu Mar 24, 2011 3:33 pm | |
| Quite interesting.
How often do you create poems? | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Thu Mar 24, 2011 5:24 pm | |
| ("...ah now..." replied the goblin again, continuing "...a lot depends on how much time I have on my hands, but mostly these days I'm into livewriting elsewhere...", and with that the goblin posted another) To grandma and the beach at FelixstoweGrandma you're so late and many years in passing But the sea and sand's still there and all those people basking. I suppose there's nothing yesteryear about this boisterous sea Just you had to go on from here and leave our beach to me. Yet today this Winter's tide that breaks upon our shore marks your daughter's slide to where we were before. To weather to the last I swear while she goes on ahead A promise to ones past it seems towards one future dead. -fleamailman- | |
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Thu Mar 24, 2011 8:05 pm | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Thu Mar 24, 2011 8:19 pm | |
| ("...thanks but no..." replied the goblin, but without malice though, simply he was into something else now, adding "...some other time then...", whereupon the goblin just added his take on the highflight poem) Modern day witchesAh but I too, have slipped beyond this Earth And formed those things that reason brings Onward I've typed and joined a tumbling mirth Of cascading codes -- and made a hundred things You have not dreamed of -- revealed and stored and strung Ever on this black screen. Typing here, I've raced my thoughts along, and flung My heart at goals where others pier Of birth, these children of a coded .bat Who, if they could, would laugh and say: "Well thanks but ain't it funny that Man has maths where God has clay" -fleamailman- | |
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NightFlame Scout
Posts : 375 Join date : 2010-05-12 Age : 27 Location : Fairy Tail Headquarters
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:54 pm | |
| I have to admit, those poems are really good! Keep up the good work. | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:20 am | |
| (on the boy who had got of thrown out of the site for lying about his age) poor steviepoor stevie boy had learned his fate for five more years he'd have to wait but if he could just wait till then he'd learn the goblin too, was only ten "...well yes, but I was much older then..."' -fleamailman- | |
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:00 pm | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:08 pm | |
| A snapshot momentRagdoll on a gravestone Forlorn upon the grass Seems you have made home Amongst these bodies of our past Whose silent watchful ways Divides the worlds between us so Into you the one that stays And me who has to go, Are you watching too I wonder And what is it you see Just a man in his late Summer In this churchyard cemetery. -fleamailman- | |
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:00 pm | |
| I like how you find pictures that fit well with your poems. | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:34 pm | |
| - Quote :
- I like how you find pictures that fit well with your poems.
"...nothing to it, simply one posts a picture with each post one does..." replied the goblin now, adding "...you see, I once had another thread here, but it was deleted for posting pictures with the texts, but one is never going to perfect an illustrator's eye without practice, so now, whenever I post a text, I attach a picture to it...", at which point the goblin again looked at the text he had just written, and tried to remember which, amongst the pictures he had, seemed to say the same thing, where that picture he knew would then underline the text like a dress statement
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:37 pm | |
| Ahh i understand. Nice going. | |
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Casanova624 Defender
Posts : 1185 Join date : 2010-02-11 Age : 29 Location : Canada, Alberta
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:42 pm | |
| The Day That I Cried
I wish that I knew what happened Crying is something I don't do I know I must do something, but what? Should I tell my mom? My friends? A lot of things have disturbed me recently I must do something soon
I wish I could stop crying but I can't What I seen is so disturbing I don't think this will ever stop. Holed up in my room for two days now. Someone is coming up the stairs, probably my mom giving me food. There's a knock on my door, I open it. My closest friend is standing there, I let him in and sit back down.
I tell him everything of what happened. He understands what I told him. He starts explaining a lot of things, some stuff that even he has been through. I was impressed how he held up for so long. He told me not to worry. I would soon be out and doing what I do best. I thanked him and he left.
I haven't seen him for almost a week now. But that was my fault. I leave my room, go through the house. I find myself outside. Breathing in more fresh air.
Cordell Brady | |
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fleamailman Penitent
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: Poems Poems and more Poems! Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:23 pm | |
| ("...nice..." went the goblin again, wondering if prose was ok here, saying "...you can delete this post if it's not right here) months had passed since he had been here, the icons still played above the box to the droning of the computer and a long moment passed before the goblin could type on ever able to recall his mother passing though that cottage hospital to the merlin's cave, the place she waits her last out now, so a week from now the goblin would be back with his family looking for a job, the effort had saved the family thousands of pounds but the harsh pictures of old age remains vivid, the right thing had been done, the debt paid to his childhood, and by now a tree in the garden had began to tilt, unable to cut it down, the goblin had just pruned back as many of the branches as he could thinking that it would at least deny the wind its grip before the men would come to remove it. sighing "...well, I did my best to keep her standing..." | |
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